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This is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey Program, I am excited to see that you are participating in SLJ this summer!
I really enjoyed reading your post about what foods you would take on a sea voyage! I like how provided a great explanation on why you would take each item of food that you choose with you. What is your favourite food, and why did you or did you not decide to take that on the sea voyage with you? My favourite food is ice-cream and I think that it would be very hard for me to take ice-cream out to sea with me because it would melt!
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ReplyDeleteThis is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey Program, I am excited to see that you are participating in SLJ this summer!
I really enjoyed reading your post about what foods you would take on a sea voyage! I like how provided a great explanation on why you would take each item of food that you choose with you.
What is your favourite food, and why did you or did you not decide to take that on the sea voyage with you? My favourite food is ice-cream and I think that it would be very hard for me to take ice-cream out to sea with me because it would melt!
When reading your post I noticed that you have actually embedded a Google Doc in your blog post. To make it easier to read I recommend copying and pasting the text from the doc.
Use Ctrl Shift V to paste your text into your blog post.
You could also insert an image or drawing
to help readers connect with your text.
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Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey