Tuesday, 30 July 2019

New years poem and picture

Happy new year, 

I wish you all the best and hope you reach your

desired goals,

and when you reach them deserve a well rest.

I hope for your completion of your goals and desires,

and I wish you peace alongside a brighter and a

better new

year. 

2 comments:

  1. I liked how you draw you own picture but next time you should make your story longer.

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  2. I give you a relational because your poem has got hyperbowl simile and a aliteration with some extra key words.

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